Revision Project 1 02/17/20

My revision process for project one was very simple. Having done the peer review in class that gave me a lot of ideas to work with to improve my project. My first draft was done on my ipad and was a very rough sketch. For my second draft I began to move the ideas over to lucid chart which made everything much neater. I was working on my project in my dorm room at my desk while listening to music last night. The revision process probably took a total of an hour and a half. I also took the ideas from our Visual Rhetoric and Basic Design Principles and began to incorporate that into my second draft. I feel like my second draft is much better than my first draft in terms of neatness and organization but the content did not really change. I feel more confident with the content that I included because of the peer review session. I felt like I was definitely more determined to do the project because I had a better understanding of what was expected. Honestly, I liked my revision process and I don’t think I would alter it much other than starting it earlier.